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January 2
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A Quick Bath by Neko-me A Quick Bath by Neko-me
Commission for :iconmoppypuppy:

Twily had persevered through her accelerated training routine, her magic was now up to par with Celestia's standards and things were starting to calm down, but after all of that hardship Twily still didn't know why all of this was happening.

Twilight was able to go back to school with the other fillies, but all was not well.
After a particularly terrible day with her peers at school, Twily was ostracized by her classmates jealous of Twily's advanced magic, labeled as a show-off and a teachers pet for being the sole pony privileged to spend all her time with Celestia. One even having the gall to claim that Twily had it easier with the Princess. This would make Twilight very apprehensive about flaunting her magic in the future.

Twi came to Celestia a mess from all the things some of her classmates threw at her. This made Twi late for a training session the Princess and she was given a harsh and rapid bath to make up for lost time. It was at that point Twily decided she had enough and used her new found intellect to question the Princess as to why this was only happening to her.

Surprisingly, Celestia didn't get angry over Twilight's aggressive tone. She just smiled, Celestia still couldn't simply spell out what Twilight was expected to do, but Twily would soon get an answer.

Thanx for the favs and comments!

Do not use it without my written permission!

MLP:FIM belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.
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>INB4 this gets critiqued :ohnoes:

I must say, I just got done looking over some of your other works, at least two of which were saddening and borderline-depressive works between these two, so seeing something adorable is quite the turn-around medication :XD:

Celestia being the patient but playful-when-appropriate second-mother figure for Twilight is an old fandom theme now, but it's always going to be a golden one. I think this is a perfect scene that depicts the two of them on an average evening, after lessons :giggle:

Also, a word of advice on file formats, always use PNG as your image extension, never use JPG, especially when it comes to artwork :) JPG's are lower quality and cause pixelation, which can take away an artworks' crispness and thus overall appeal. I haven't looked at each and every single piece in your gallery, but this work here is a JPG, and with your style of lighting, pixels are actually pretty visible in some areas :meow: Just something to keep in mind for your future works!

Keep it up as always, and I now proudly add myself to your watch list, that I should have been on a long time ago :D
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2wingo Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So, Celestia is doing the academic equivalent of beating a child until he's tough enough to fight back. Yeah, I can see her doing that.
DallasBlack Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
That look on Twili's face just kills it!*

*I mean that in a good way BTW.
Stevie-Bond Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Poor Twily, I'm sure she'll get a straight answer after her rapid bath moment. =p
marinus18 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
are you going to continue this?
Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Unless the commissioner asks to, I don't think so.
marinus18 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
aw, that's too bad.
MisterKaos Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DerpTheTeletubbie Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More light then your last Commission with him that i hated for making me sad and make Celestia go -5 spots on my fav pony meter now she is number 10
MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
You gotta read the description.
DerpTheTeletubbie Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i did read the description this does not redeem celestia one bit dude
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