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Dashie and Twilight by Neko-me Dashie and Twilight by Neko-me
Just a little something, because I was criticised that I only draw depressive and sad pics. So here it is a happy pic with Dashi and Twilight.

Thanx for the favs and comment!

Do not use it without my written permission!

MLP:FIM belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust
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:icontwibeamplz:
Wow! Why isn't this getting more views?

Look at this! The clouds are so realistic and beautiful and so is the ocean! I love it! I like how you put realistic clouds and made your ponies super realistic with your really good shading. Your anatomy is really really good so I can't find any mistakes here.

I just love how much talent there is in this fandom. It's incredible. You need to get out there and make more stuff like this because this is just perfect. I can't find any mistakes here and I can't think of anything that can make this better.
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:icondragonjek:
Dragonjek Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
So, I've got no wings to take me up to you, but I do have the Twinkling Balloon!
Hopefully to one day be upgraded to the Twinkling Dirigible.
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:iconbotboy41:
Botboy41 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
This is So Adorable, Word cannot do it justice, I Love it
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:iconcupcakekaiju:
CupcakeKaiju Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconblackvegetable:
Blackvegetable Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Awwwww... :aww:
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:icontadashi--kun:
Tadashi--kun Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so adorable!
Love it! :love:
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:iconjcosneverexisted:
JcosNeverExisted Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconalyssahofffee9:
alyssahofffee9 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
so cute!!!
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:iconoscarina1234:
Oscarina1234 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My.. my heart... sfabjasdfusdfhjfvhhlsdvsdf
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RainbowYoshi305 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwwwww....:iconcutenessoverloadplz:
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:iconhelsaabi:
Helsaabi Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
I really love it! ^^
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:iconkapuchu1:
Kapuchu1 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Dashie looks sad D:

No really... She does :/
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She is just confused. :D
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:iconimacake:
imacake Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
But she does indeed look sad.


Also, I suck at writing critiques because they want to format my brain, but here you go:
Try not applying too much shading. What most people get wrong is: they do linear shading, while it should be rather exponential. Shading itself does NOT actually exist, it should be one part with the drawing, so if you could find any way to apply it somewhere in the sketch stage / shortly after, would be nice. While your clouds are light, the ponies are heavy candies.
Next thing is the relation of the complexity/abstraction proportions of foreground and background (ponies and clouds). Your clouds are very fuzzy and inaccurate, while your ponies are very smooth candies(possibly too smooth, maybe you'd want to work on that. Else remember heavy smoothness just doesnt go together). That just doesn't fit together.
The left side's perspective is really wrong.

But when looking just at the ponies, you have a damn smooth line, and I imagine the sketches were awesome. Also, keep going :3
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The way I draw is intentional. I like differentiate the characters from the background that is why I kept the outlines.
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:iconspecialeyesplz:
specialeyesplz Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Professional Artist
There are ways to differentiate characters that does not create an effect of having multiple art styles that do not go together. You can use color to differentiate them by having saturated colors on your subjects but mute out the colors on the background. Twilight's purple color and Dash's rainbow mane and cyan colored coat should very easily distinguish itself against the predominately white and blue background.

You can also consider blurring out the background like professional photographers. Any photographer who knows their craft can use that trick to differentiate their subjects from the foreground and background without relying on photoshop to slap outlines around their work.

Just a thought.
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know all of these techniques I made some photos myself and again it was intentional to use this artstyle.
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:iconimacake:
imacake Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Then make the ponies not heavy.
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You mean?
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:iconimacake:
imacake Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
:c I'm out of ways to explain.
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OKay :)
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:iconkapuchu1:
Kapuchu1 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Good... :3
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:iconcasperkdk:
Casperkdk Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Puppies!
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:iconemillz1:
emillz1 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Still sad. Anything with Dashie. Just...sad...
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are right... XD
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:iconsomepony:
Somepony Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Oh goodness, whelp, there goes my heart.
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:icondallydog101:
DallyDog101 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
I died, so cute ;u;
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:iconzora-artist:
zora-artist Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
dawww!
fillys area always adorable! =3
Awesome image!
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ritgh, ritgh? Thank you! :D
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:iconzora-artist:
zora-artist Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
X3 your welcome!
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RoboKitty Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Why does Dash still look sad? And why does she look half Twilight's age?
(I criticize because blind praise of pictures we already know are awesome is bad)
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
I just wanted to draw a filly Dashie. I didn't specified Twilight's age on purpose.
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TheWrongestTrousers Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Looks like Rainbow Dash just woke up. Twilight's bothering her, this is the saddest pic you've ever done. I'm crying because it appears that Rainbow Dash has just awakened earlier than she would've wanted.

You do not see the tears, but I feel them.

In all seriousness, I'm likin' this!
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
Yeah I was crying while drawing it. :D
Thank you! :D
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:iconthewrongesttrousers:
TheWrongestTrousers Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lol, no probalo, sugarcube.
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:iconsuperalvinator:
SuperAlvinator Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Dude, your MLP art is fascinating. It's a good thing I'm watching you buddy.:)

Keep it up.
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx I'm happy you think so! :D
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Supercooper17 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Aweweeeeeee
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SimeonLeonard Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, nice! I love the bright lighting!
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay!!! :D
I'm glad! :D
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