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'Let's go home' (colored) by Neko-me 'Let's go home' (colored) by Neko-me
Commission for :iconrated-r-ponystar:: colored version

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Critique by journaltimid Jul 4, 2014, 8:51:07 PM
Due to this being my first critique I will be following a cookie-cutter template to state my opinion.

Vision: I personally find this art reflects a resonating theme of kindling a burning ember into a fire of emotion that helps illuminate the future. Or, simply, learning to care and love. It's a theme that can pluck the heartstrings of many if presented right, and you, sir (or mam), have done so in a beautiful way. You have wowed your audience with the theme and have successfully delivered it.

Originality: Your style is quite interesting and refreshing compared to other drawings for MLP. The style of the ears are something that I see 'once in a blue moon', and even the manga style eyes are somewhat new. However, I also need to add that the subject of Scootaloo's and Rainbow Dash's relationship has already been done multiple times and is becoming a little stale. Whether it's drawings of Rainbow Factory or harmless ones like this, there are hundreds of them flooding through many websites.

Technique: As mentioned earlier, I enjoy your style and admire your sweeping brushstrokes; however, there are a few things I want to nit-pick on. First, there is a sliver of silver in Dash's tail that is uncolored and the outline colors do not match those in the show. Second, Scootaloo's wings are entirely disproportionate to the rest of her body, try and enlarge them some. Third, I personally don't like the bit of fur that connects the tail to the body. There are also some things that you did get right (i.e. Dash's CM is in the right spot/has right colors, overall mane and tail styles/colors, and giving Dash a believable snout).

Impact: What can't you say about this that has already been said in the comments? This absolutely melts our hearts by seeing the love and joy shared between the two. In short, I can't handle all the feels. I almost felt tears in my eyes from the absolute soul wrenching connection that is conveyed by this piece. Great job, A+, gold star, or whatever kind of medal you want for making half of the comments section either squeal in delight or tear up from the beauty of it all.
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Goremise Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

hnnngggggg

so ADORABLE! :3
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MEGARAINBOWDASH2000 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
awwwwwwwww this is so heartwarming Dashie adopting Scoots so cute
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:iconjulian0123:
julian0123 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Somehow, it's even cuter in color :D
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:iconmustlovefrogs:
MustLoveFrogs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Professional General Artist
This is relevant to my headcanon.  :3
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:iconattack193:
attack193 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
DDDAAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconcrimson-kaizer:
Crimson-Kaizer Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OH SHIT! FEELS BOMB!

TO THE SHELTER!!!
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:iconderpydewey:
DerpyDewey Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student General Artist
That would fill my heart up with so much happyness 
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:iconelwisfrompoland:
ElwisFromPoland Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
Dashie - best flyer and mother in all of Equestria.
This is so freaking adorable, I love it. Fantastic work.
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:iconcheeseylover365:
cheeseylover365 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Artist
omg so cute
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:iconrandomgal9050:
Randomgal9050 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oops! ......................Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Huggy heart) [V6] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Huggy heart) [V6] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Huggy heart) [V6] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Huggy heart) [V6] 
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:icontomfraggle:
TomFraggle Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:nod:
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:iconjohannchristopherg9:
johannchristopherg9 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Artist
It's like Rainbow Dash giving many hugs and kisses to her beloved Scootaloo:heart:
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:icongrimmjow-thesexta:
Grimmjow-thesexta Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
Nice.
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:icondanielhemming:
danielhemming Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Made me cry
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:iconamrasfelagund:
AmrasFelagund Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Third :+fav:'s the charm! I wholeheartedly approve of Scootalove by Rainbow Dash!
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WebWalker756 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
What sells this pic for me, besides the fact that you did a pretty good job of capturing the art style of the show? The concept of this picture. While we know that Scootaloo DOES have a home (as seen in "Flight to the Finish"), we still haven't seen her parents, or know what kind of relationship she has with them. Thusly, the idea of being officially adopted as a little sister by her idol might just make the little filly's day, and then some.

Seriously. The look of tearful joy on Scootaloo's face just gives me all sorts of feels, along with a melting heart. :)
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was the point : 3
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templar127 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
HNNNNNNNGGGG!!!
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:iconnuvaprime:
NuvaPrime Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
I don't believe that Scootaloo is an orphan, but still, this piece is very touching
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:iconartention:
Artention Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god, so adorable !! x3
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:icondakathi666:
Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
MY FEELS!
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:iconfralleman:
FralLeman Featured By Owner Edited Jul 5, 2014
You should put a warning label on your material, or you'll get sued for all of the heart attacks you're causing!  >.<  Speaking of which...Hrrrgh!  My feels!
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconkyoshyu:
Kyoshyu Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhnnnnngplz:
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:iconblazeferdinand:
BlazeFerdinand Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Awww, this is so beautiful :)
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:icongraphiteheart:
GraphiteHeart Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
this is so sweet!
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:iconklepack:
Klepack Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Curse this fanbase and its ability, to make art and music that makes me feel things!!! I just hope, daaaawws are not limited...
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leadfoot9 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
I have serious doubts as to Dash's capacity to be a responsible parent or legal guardian. Fun bachelor uncle (aunt) maybe, since she does seem good with kids, but actually raising somepony? XD

Very cute.
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:icondynasty-dawn:
Dynasty-Dawn Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Writer
I find this really heartwarming. Love  Keep up the good work!
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:iconabronyaccount:
ABronyAccount Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Rainbow Dash bought Scootaloo! There's the bill of sale right there!
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:iconelementof-loyalty:
ElementOf-Loyalty Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:icondawwwwplz:-I bet Scoot's stuff has already been moved in by Derpy Deliveries.
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Scootabyte Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd love to see an episode with Scootaloo's back story. And this moment totally needs to happen :P
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
eyupp :D
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:iconajdrianpony:
Ajdrianpony Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Aah .. my day is happy thanx for this image :) I love it :) Thank you Neko.me :)
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Any time :D
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Kyle-0529 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
rainbow dash my little pony mlp brony

*explodes*

Too much cute.
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:iconlaughingonline:
LaughingOnLine Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
RD: "You know how we've always called each other sisters?"
SC: "Yeah?"
RD: "I... I couldn't stand saying that, and knowing it's not true.  So..."
SC: (Scared) "So what?!"
RD: (This scene) "So I went ahead and-"
(She's cut off as Scootaloo embraces her, tears streaming around her enormous smile as she half-cries and half-laughs)
RD: (Smiling) "Come on, Squirt.  Let's go home."
SC: (Stares up at her)
RD: "Our home!"
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!
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:iconthesmokingcrow:
TheSmokingCrow Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HNNNNNNNNGGGGGG! SO MUCH.....FEELS!!! GAHHH!!!
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:iconicemanv:
IcemanV Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
THE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS
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:iconeverlastingjoy:
EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
:iconhnnnnngplz:
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cuteness overload!
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:icontruemadayar:
TrueMadayar Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Lovely...also reminds me of Darkwing Duck.
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:icondev-i:
Dev-i Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The feels....
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:iconneokiva:
neokiva Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHHHHYYYYYY? *liquid pride*
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:iconn0tsaved:
n0tsaved Featured By Owner Edited Jul 4, 2014
I remember reading a fanfic that went along this thought. Made me tear up :'3
Good job :D
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:iconshivalwolf:
shivalwolf Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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:iconmegarainbowdash2000:
MEGARAINBOWDASH2000 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
awwwwwww so cute
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:iconyoshiringo:
YoshiRingo Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
OMG bawwwwwww, too adorable!! They are just the cutest! I'm so happy you finished this! ^^
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satanicsocialist Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
aww, that's soo great! they should make that happen in the show!
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