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'Sorry I ate them' by Neko-me 'Sorry I ate them' by Neko-me
I forgive you.

Thanx for the favs and comments!

Do not use it without my written permission!

MLP:FIM belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.
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Is anyone else tempted to just gently pull her out of the cookie jar and then just hold her while you tell her that it's all right? Or is it just me?

As far as it comes as a piece of art, I don't think anyone could possibly deny the fact that this has it all— from vision to impact, it's got all of that and much more. The vision is plain and simple, sitting directly in front of us all; it also helps to lead to originality, technique, and impact.

In regards to colours, shades, hues, tints, lights, values, motions, time, and everything else, it is represented magnificently; you can clearly see the shadows cast on the pot, Fluttershy, and the ground from the sun. As for the clear bubbles, I will address that later on in this critique. With the use of lights, values, shades, hues, and tints, we can see that this cookie jar has had many years of good service; there are small cracks here and there, and the label is even worn out somewhat from much use and love.

In regards to the main focus of the picture, young Fluttershy is in tears and ashamed for eating up all the delicious cookies; :iconneko-me: did a splendid job with her shy, hesitantly afraid appearance as she is in the jar to avoid punishment. Then again, who would even be able to consider punishing this adorable little filly for being so honest and truthful for finishing the goodies? Regardless, you can see the tears welled up in her eyes as she is sincere and wholehearted in her apology. This applies well to the use of :iconneko-me:'s art technique; whatever it may be, we can see much time and labour went into making this stunningly emotional piece of art.

The impact is just the emotional state we get from seeing Fluttershy so upset and nearing the point of crying for eating all the cookies and not leaving you any; this would help to explain the clear bubbles all about the masterpiece. From Fluttershy's point of view, with tears in her eyes, she just sees you slightly blurry and in your current temperament, whatever it may be; it also adds to the emotional appeal. Also, I would like to call you all to the center point of her eyes, where there is one shape that prominently sticks out to me from all that white light in her eyes. Closest to the center of her pupils, which is where a great deal of light is concentrated, there appears to be a heart in each pupil; I caught sight of that studying her eyes very closely, and I have never seen such a creative spark before with Fluttershy. It does add to her sad, ashamed, and apologetic state of being, and it does impact the audience who views it.

I've seen several pieces of artwork depicting a pony of the mane six in a cookie jar, but never have I seen one of a pony who would be so ashamed, so guilty about eating the scrumptious cookies that she's about to cry while apologizing! I, personally, believe there is only one thing to do here— Pick her up, tell her that you can always make some more, and just cuddle her until she calms herself(or until she falls asleep; then cuddling is just inevitable for such a cute pony).

I do not think I could give this any less than five stars through all four categories of vision, originality, technique, and impact; it's a beautiful masterpiece of art, and is very much a wonderful emotion to feel seeing her and then contemplating what you would do if this ever happened to you in real life. I am proud to say I recommend watching this amazing deviant, and enjoying all their marvelous artwork. I cannot wait to see your next piece of love, labour, and creativity.
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2wingo Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"Not yet, you're not. But you will be. By the time I'm done with you, if you aren't the sorriest filly in all of Cloudsdale, you'll certainly be the sorest."

"No, Daddy, please - !"
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FaethS Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Fluttershy, you have committed the crime of stealing cookies from the cookie jar!! To pay for your crime, you get...

THE TICKLE MONSTER!! >8D
*proceeds to tickle Fluttershy*
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Star-Bolt-Pony Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
DDAAWWWW!!!!
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DallasBlack Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
Who knew cookies could be so fluttorable?!
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LaughingOnLine Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Ah, I don't need cookies anyway. (Lifts her out of the jar, nuzzles her nose, and hugs her tight) You're sweet enough for me!
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ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaww... it's okay, Fluttershy... you don't need to feel guilty... :meow: :meow: :meow:
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Hunterreaper4444 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
It's ok Fluttershy. I could never be mad at you
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Lugia9 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Aw! it's alright Fluttershy I'm happy you liked them so no crying now*dry her tears*
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kylgrv Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Aw, don't feel bad Fluttershy.  It's ok.
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TheWubinator Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Help..... me dying from..... cuteness...! *faints*
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LOLNOPETHECAT7889 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Student Artist
MAH COOOOKIEEEEE- Its ok fluttershy i cant stay mad at you
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Claritea Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem, Flutters! You can always eat whatever you want! ^^
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Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is obscenely cute. Shame on you. 
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FallenShadow000 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*cuddles Fluttershy* I can't be mad at you. If anyone ever was angry, they have no soul.
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Popcorn02 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so cute!!!X3 Emote :eeeee: love it!!!:love: 
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Popcorn02 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so cute:heartyfaint: :heartyfaint: X3 Emote :eeeee: 
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Meribellzporductions Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Artist
It's okay fluttershy,you can have all the cookies you want *Hugs*
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MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
Everyone loves Fluttershy, but she can't learn that stealing is okay.
What should we do to teach her not to steal?
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Jlun2 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
How dare you ate all those cookies!? You should be publicly named and shamed!
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zarjorinsor Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
:iconsadfluttershyplz:
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MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
SUFFER.
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horsesrock847 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is it possible to die from extreme cuteness???X3 Emote :eeeee:
 
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MarshmallowXSwirl Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sooooo cute
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AeliosZero Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconhnnnnngplz: :iconsaysplz: HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGG!!!
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Fenrath-The-Thief Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! *explodes from cuteness overload*
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Sonikku-Otaku Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
You are forgiven, Fluttershy. Would like some more? I'll bake them fresh for you. <3
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piepiepinkype Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HHHNNNNG
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MorrinAsturias Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Well...I lived a good life...*Clutches his chest and dies from cuteness overload* @_@
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Professional Writer
if this gets any cuter, I will just die.
well done!
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BronyStar Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I made the cookies for you!

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Nyxa-Pony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
It's.... Aaaawww cute!

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lyokian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
It's alright little one...I'm not upset.
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ChaosKing57 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Don't look into her eyes! It's a trap! An adorable, adorable trap!
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X4vrztesp Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
me : MY COOKIEEEEESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :noes:

Fluttershy : "sorry i ate them"

me : NO... YOU CAN'T FOOL ME WITH THAT EYE FLUTTERSHY.... GIVE ME BACK MY COOKIE!!

Fluttershy : "meep"

me : I... NO.. GIVE IT back....

Fluttershy : "(starts crying) squeak "

me : i.. um.... errr.... aaah... aaaaaawww... nevermind.. you can have all the cookies...

Fluttershy : yaaay...


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Maddog3060 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
I'm pretty sure if I saw this in real life I'd die of a heart attack.

But it would be the happiest moment of my life. ;p
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's for sure! :D
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pytko3 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
If you wanted cookies Fluttershy, all you had to do was ask.
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Nednay Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
It's ok :3
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Markk-N-Viacka Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
:diehappy: 
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FangMoon-Howl Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
*heart fails*
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cuddleskitty Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D'awwww!

*explodes from cuteness overload*
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swatfox6 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
your are was well done and colored very well the only problem i have with it is the shading is a little flat
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CosmicCourage Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Smoochie oochie coochie coo!
I made those cookies just for you!
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Botboy41 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, This is SO ADORABLE I LOVE IT

And Its OK Little Fluttershy, I'll Just Make some more and a special Batch Just for you
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thatguy1945 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconhomero1plz::iconhomero3plz::iconhomero5plz:
:iconhomero2plz::iconhomero4plz::iconhomero6plz:
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hbdhow Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well.....I think I have something to say to you,young filly.
(put another jar of cookies next to her)
Go on, you can have more as you like.
(Sit there and watch her eat more cookies with smile and tear on my face.)
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwww :)
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heyyitzhailz Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
how can u be mad at dat face?! AWWW
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Blackwind06 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
aaww it;s OK I'll just buy more *picks her up
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