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'Teach me how to fly, sis!' by Neko-me 'Teach me how to fly, sis!' by Neko-me
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MLP:FIM belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.
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Holy hell, the feels in this pic got to me the moment I saw the title. The happy expression on Scoots face, coupled with the title, really gets to ya good. The background is just as it needs to be; it's there, but it allows the viewer to focus what's really important: Scootaloo and Rainbow.

While I love what you're going for in this picture, there are a few things I think you can improve on. For example, Dash's muzzle is too blocky for a mare. You see how you drew Scootaloo's muzzle? Draw Dash's like that. Their postures are perfect, the outline is a little off-putting. The white outline followed by the black makes it feel like you just copy and pasted the two characters into a background that was already drawn. If that is not the case, I'd highly suggest you do away with the white outline.

Next, I like how you tried to put emphasis on Dash's breast (the part where Scootaloo's hooves are touching), but I think you overdid it a little. You don't need to show that, and it kinda makes her look a little masculine, same goes for her blocky muzzle.

This might just be me, but I think that Scootaloo's wings should be just a little bit bigger.

Lastly, the ears look like they're way too thick. I suggest you make the edges thinner by expanding the inner part of the ear so that the edges of the ear are thinner.

Overall, I really do love this picture. The title is perfect, Scootaloo's happy hopeful expression even more so. I rate this picture a 9/10!
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UAkimov09 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
Awesome ! : )
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DerpyandMe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is too adorable! I love it!
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Penguinator24 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just so adorable. Fantastic job.
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coolclaytony Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
IS SO TINY!
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DNFTT2014 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconhnngplz:-The smaller Scoot gets the deadlier cute she becomes.
:iconrainbowdashwtfplz:-Umm,I guess I can make some time for you,pip squeak.
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Artention Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So cute ! x3
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you need to refresh your equine anatomy in regards to chest structure, but generally this is very nice! Lovely use of colour and nice lines! :)
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FralLeman Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
My feels...
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cajobif Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Aww... Scootalove.

She will. One day or another.

BEautiful work
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Jacsveus Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww Heart
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