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'Teach me how to fly, sis!' by Neko-me 'Teach me how to fly, sis!' by Neko-me
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Holy hell, the feels in this pic got to me the moment I saw the title. The happy expression on Scoots face, coupled with the title, really gets to ya good. The background is just as it needs to be; it's there, but it allows the viewer to focus what's really important: Scootaloo and Rainbow.

While I love what you're going for in this picture, there are a few things I think you can improve on. For example, Dash's muzzle is too blocky for a mare. You see how you drew Scootaloo's muzzle? Draw Dash's like that. Their postures are perfect, the outline is a little off-putting. The white outline followed by the black makes it feel like you just copy and pasted the two characters into a background that was already drawn. If that is not the case, I'd highly suggest you do away with the white outline.

Next, I like how you tried to put emphasis on Dash's breast (the part where Scootaloo's hooves are touching), but I think you overdid it a little. You don't need to show that, and it kinda makes her look a little masculine, same goes for her blocky muzzle.

This might just be me, but I think that Scootaloo's wings should be just a little bit bigger.

Lastly, the ears look like they're way too thick. I suggest you make the edges thinner by expanding the inner part of the ear so that the edges of the ear are thinner.

Overall, I really do love this picture. The title is perfect, Scootaloo's happy hopeful expression even more so. I rate this picture a 9/10!
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Jose-Ramiro Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, very cute.
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Maedimples Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
HEADCANNON CONFIRMED!
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UAkimov09 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
Awesome ! : )
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:iconderpyandme:
DerpyandMe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is too adorable! I love it!
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Penguinator24 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just so adorable. Fantastic job.
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:iconcoolclaytony:
coolclaytony Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
IS SO TINY!
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ElementOf-Loyalty Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconhnngplz:-The smaller Scoot gets the deadlier cute she becomes.
:iconrainbowdashwtfplz:-Umm,I guess I can make some time for you,pip squeak.
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Artention Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So cute ! x3
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you need to refresh your equine anatomy in regards to chest structure, but generally this is very nice! Lovely use of colour and nice lines! :)
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FralLeman Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
My feels...
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cajobif Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Aww... Scootalove.

She will. One day or another.

BEautiful work
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Jacsveus Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww Heart
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:iconagetian:
Agetian Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Awww this is so adorable! :heart:
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:iconsilberhase:
silberhase Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Scootaloo: Wanna fly! Wanna fly!
Rainbow: [...]
So beautiful how tiny you drew Scootaloo.
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:iconhnnnnngplz:

I really like your style, it makes this all the more cuter.

I have to ask though, Scoot looks smaller then Dash then she does in regards to the show, was that intentional?
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yupp it was : 3
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EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Very smart :).
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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Belactherelic Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
This is adorable! :D
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GUILLE832 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
How in the world did you manage to make Dashie and Scoots more cute if possible?! ***dammit :O
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FanaticTVzombie Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Rainbow is pretty awesome... And so is this!
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:iconarccahlon:
ArcCahlon Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she looks so tiny like a little baby foal ^^ 
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SwanLullaby Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet!
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YoshiRingo Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Gaaaauuuuwww dats sooooo cute!!
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SkulY2K Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The cuteness! There's so much!
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JakeBomb Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Artist
THE CUTENESS LEVEL IS SO HIGH MY HEAD JJUST BLEW UP!
But seriously, this is so adorable!
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TrueMadayar Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Oh my goodness, the cuteness level!

I still love your pony design, just love it.
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kyuubinaruto18 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Can I use this as the cover of my fanfic? I'll link back to you.
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sure
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kyuubinaruto18 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
www.fimfiction.net/story/16991…

There it is, sourced back to you. It's so cute.
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx if you don't mind I'd like you to put a link to my pic in the description. Thanx!
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MrLunaz Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
this needs a part 2.
where dashie sits down hugs her and and kiss her on the head. 

scootaloo saying: Mommy. 


so cute. 
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Kyoshyu Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhnnnnngplz:
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:iconlaughingonline:
LaughingOnLine Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Might use this in "The Mare Who Colored My World," if it's alright with you?
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Come on, Dashie! Do what you can for the little puppy!
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GrandMoffPony Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Daaww!
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SimeonLeonard Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww :heart: That's an interesting way to do RD's tail! I haven't seen it done that way before but it's kinda cool!
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx : 3
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orthisone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Any more adorable and this picture might be considered a weapon of mass destruction.
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KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
She's so tiney!
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