'Come closer, I'm not angry ...'

Vision: The colors blend beautifully, and the textures that describe each part of the piece just... wow! The flames are beautifully done! Especially the flames! I mean, flames are very difficult to pull off, and with you jumping over that hurdle, it's just come out amazing. The pillow and fabric also represent just how soft it looks, so once again! The texture is beautiful!

One thing that did kind of pull it down though... are the eyes (or irises). They feel kind of... bland. Almost as if they were neglected. Maybe a bit more luminosity could've spiced it up.

And the final problem is a small one, but still kind of sticking out of the ground like a stick. Overall, the anatomy was very well done, but the front shoulder seems almost detached like a toy. Maybe if you would've added a bit of fur poking out, it wouldn't seem so 'out of place.
<sub>You really suck at puns sparrow. Stahp train to look cool.

Originality: Now in the fandom's widespread of art... I've seen quite a bit of FireSparkle, and truth be told, it's gotten a bit overrated (in my opinion). BUT! You did do something different with it! Most of the time I was seeing pokemon crossovers with her, but instead you did her in almost a teasting manner, which is hardly ever done. So even if it has been a bit overdone, you saved it with the pose and the setting.

Technique: You are an artist who KNOWS what to do. Your colors blend so well, and the textures amplify this piece. Not only that, but you background fits the mood that Twilight is emphasizing! You made this speak 'teasing', which isn't easy to do in general.

One thing I do kind of feel was lacking with your technique, is the lineart. It seems a bit thick in some of twilight, and some parts don't really fit the place it's in, but it's hardly noticable.

Conclusion: Overall, this picture is just... BOOM! It packs a great punch while maintaining the balancing softness it needs. I can literally hear fire crackling, and can imagine how soft and comfortable the pillow would be! You, my dear friend, have done a splendid job!</sub>